Tracked Edits and Comments in a Blog Posted on LinkedIn: “The Ability of Conscious Choice”

In-line, tracked edits of the full first draft of a blog. Example is representative of a mid-range, intermediate-level edit and proofing of work that includes corrections to basic grammar and word usage or phrasing issues, plus minor stylistic suggestions to promote a clear, consistent message.

  • Project Date: September 2016
  • Role: Editor, Copywriter, Copy Editor, Proofreader
  • View Completed Blog on LinkedIn
  • View Tracked Edits Below: